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Hi there,
Can you proofread the following sentence.
1. Wesley Mall is fantastic big. When you take a rest after a long shopping, you can watch a film or play roller coaster at the shopping mall.
2. Wartmart is usually crowded during weekend OR weekend.
Many thanks
peter
Hi there,
Can you proofread the following sentence.
1. Wesley Mall is fantastic big. When you take a rest after a long shopping, you can watch a film or play roller coaster at the shopping mall.
2. Wartmart is usually crowded during weekend OR weekend.
Many thanks
peter
#1 adverb required, not adjective; "shopping for a long time".
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