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  1. 04-Nov-2007, 03:08 #1
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    Hi there,
    Is it correct to say:

    The admission fees of DisneyWorld are more expensive than those of Wonderland.

    Can I skip the word 'those of' in the above sentence?

    pete
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    Default Re: admission

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Is it correct to say:

    The admission fees of DisneyWorld are more expensive than those of Wonderland.

    Can I skip the word 'those of' in the above sentence?

    pete
    It sounds better when you leave it.
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