04-Nov-2007, 06:46
|
 | VIP Member | | Join Date: Oct 2007 Country: USA
Posts: 11,773
Current Location: Tucson, Arizona First Language: North American English Member Type: Academic Thanks: 846
Thanked 850 Times in 740 Posts
| |
 Re: rides
Quote:
Originally Posted by peter123  Hi there,
Can you proofread?
In Wonderland, I like to play the exciting rides.
pete | Hi, Pete!
A person does not 'play' the rides at an amusement park; a person 'rides' the rides' ! * When I go to Wonderland, I enjoy the exciting rides. * The roller coaster is my favorite ride. * When I go to Wonderland, I will ride the roller coaster. * At Wonderland, I like to play the games of chance that are designed for young adults. Cheers,
Amigos4 |
Linear Mode
