Resume's Objective Sentence

[sampahmel]

Greetings to all,

Please correct any grammatical mistake in the following objective sentence of my resume, (isn't the word "skills" repetitive?)


Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical skills and customer service skills.





sampahmel

[sampahmel]

inputs please ??

[Naamplao]

Originally Posted by sampahmel

Greetings to all,

Please correct any grammatical mistake in the following objective sentence of my resume, (isn't the word "skills" repetitive?)


Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical skills and customer service skills.

sampahmel

Well you can omit one "skills" by

Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical and customer service skills.

What kind of job are you applying for? This doesn't sound like a job application Objective to me it is sounding like you are applying to an institution of learning...if that is the case the Objective sounds fine (without the extra "skills")