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EEG done in January of 2007 showed background slurring which is abnormal.
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A comma before "which" is needed, unless it is the slurring itself which is abnormal.
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EEG done in January of 2007 showed background slurring which is abnormal.
This seems to be an example of quick notation, similar in nature to a shopping list or a set of reminders. Note the absence of an article before "EEG".

In situations like this we often drop unnecessary things.
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Default Re: Does this sentence require commas?

So the correct way is

An EEG done in January of 2007 showed background slurring, which is abnormal?


I thought it would be An EEG, done in January of 2007, showed background slurring, which is abnormal.

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So the correct way is

An EEG done in January of 2007 showed background slurring, which is abnormal.


I thought it would be An EEG, done in January of 2007, showed background slurring, which is abnormal.
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This is where the context is important.

The first sentence has "done in January of 2007" as an adjectival phrase modifying EEG; the second states than an EEG [that was done in January 2007 ] showed...

Which one is correct will depend on the rest of the report.
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