Enquiry

[Ily]

Dear Sir/Madam,

Grateful if you could advise whether the following sentence is grammatically correct:

"To facilitate us further considering your proposal, I should be grateful if your company could provide the following information:....."

Thank you in advance for your advice!

Regards,
Ily

[Anglika]

Dear Sir/Madam,

Grateful if you could advise whether the following sentence is grammatically correct:

"To facilitate us further considering your proposal, I should be grateful if your company could provide the following information:....."

Thank you in advance for your advice!

Regards,
Ily

Welcome to the forums.

It is grammatically ok, but rather ponderous. Perhaps "To assist us in our consideration of your proposal, I should be..." is easier to understand?