an unorthodox question

[thomasRavenelli]

Hi,

I have one page with confidential material. I am wondering if there is a way in getting an advice about the mistakes. The main problem is shifting tenses since I am writing in the past then I need to shift tenses. I am a bit confused .
Please let me know
T

[David L.]

If you wish to send a PM with the page, I will either PM it in return, or by email.

[thomasRavenelli]

thanks David. I pm the text

[David L.]

Corrected text has been PM'd to you.