l2- church's- it should be churches
l2 they're many days- there were many days
l3 I'd delete the comma before 'but to stay away'
l3 they guys new- the guys knew
l4 would said- would have saidl4 its- it's
l4 i- I
l5 mike is no going- Mike is not going
l8 I know loner- I no longer
