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Hi there,
please proofread the following sentence:


People are not willing to bring their own bags for shopping because this will bring them a lot of inconvenience.

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I would say 'cause them a lot of inconvenience'.
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Hi there,

How about 'cause a lot of inconvenience to them' or 'make a lot of inconvenience to them'?

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'cause a lot of inconvenience to them' - OK, but I prefer the other word order.
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More likely:
People are not willing to bring their own bags for shopping because it would be inconvenient.
(Don't say "make inconvenient" as that combination isn't used.)

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