Re: How to shorten these clauses? The first army that met the advancing Arabs was the Roman Army. Should we say
(1) The first army met the advancing Arabs was ... (which) out OR Incorrect grammatically. You might write, The first army to meet the advancing Arabs was... OR The first army that met the advancing Arabs was...
(2) The first army meeting the advancing Arabs was ... Correct grammatically. This is also correct in the context of what we call the Historic Present Tense. This may be a little too advanced to introduce in early stages of learning English, but look at this passage: The armies of the Greek nation camped (past tense) by the river. At dawn, they crossed (past tense) the river, meeting the advancing Arabs head-on. The most bloody battle in Greek history ensued (past tense), won only by the brilliant strategy of General Theos. He orders (present tense) his troops to take the high ground of Zeus Mountain, and in response, the Arab leader surrounds (present tense) the base of the hill. Wave after wave of troops sweep (present tense) up the hill, only to be driven back. Suddenly, the Arab leader changes (present tense...
Using the Historic Present gives the reader the sense as if it is being described as it happens. |