playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into your life.

[angliholic]

Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.



Does "puts fun into life" amount to "adds fun to life" and "fills life with fun?" Thanks.

[baqarah131]

I don't like the sentence
Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.

Better:
Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts more fun in your life.

edward

[angliholic]

I don't like the sentence
Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.

Better:
Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts more fun in your life.

edward

Thanks, baqarah.
I like your version, but I like to make sure if my suggestions are right.