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The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back,
Wang's latest album, Change Me, was released in July 2007. Change Me is indeed a change from the musical style of his previous albums. The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and laid-back.
Is it proper to rewrite the bolded line as the following? Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
The sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back overall/on the whole.
The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back, 
Re: The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back, 
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