with a funny waddle.

[angliholic]

Penguins are birds with black and white feathers and a funny waddle.



Does the above sound good? Is it better to reword it as the following? Thanks.

Penguins are birds with black and white feathers, waddling in a funny manner.

[beascarpetta]

Originally Posted by angliholic

Penguins are birds with black and white feathers and a funny waddle.



Does the above sound good? Is it better to reword it as the following? Thanks.

Penguins are birds with black and white feathers, waddling in a funny manner.

well , as you probably are well aware of, you've got the same phrase down to the last letter here.

I'd say it all depends what audience you are aiming at.

[angliholic]

Thanks, beascarpetta.
Got it.