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[peter123]

Hi there,

Could you proofread the following sentences?

When I reached my apartment building, I found a sewage pipe was broken and the sew spouted like a fountain.
The maintenance team were busy with repairing it.

Thanks
pete

[Amigos4]

Hi there,

Could you proofread the following sentences?

When I reached my apartment building, I found a sewage pipe was broken and the sew spouted like a fountain.
The maintenance team were busy with repairing it.

Thanks
pete

Pete,

When I reached my apartment building, I found a broken sewage pipe. The sewage spouted like a fountain.
The maintenance team was busy repairing it.

Cheers,
Amigos4