Could you proofread the following sentence?
When I got my apartment lobby, I found all the lifts were out of service. I had to walk up to fifteen floors to my home. It was very hard.
You could say like this too: When I got into my apartment lobby I saw that all the lifts were not working. So I had to walk up to my flat on the fifteenth floor. I got really very tired.
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