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Old 30-Dec-2007, 00:59
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Hi there,
I am writing an essay about the downsides of playing computer games. Can you proofread the following sentences?

If teenagers play computer games very often, they may forget how to social with other people, or they may not be willing to interact with others. Gradually, this will affect their social relationship, and they will have no friend.


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affect their social relationshipS ....no friendS. (Plurals)
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