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We did not ship a lot of spare part for the previously shipment, only 1% shipped with the cargo and consolidated into 1x40' container. I will arrange the transportation and customs document; if the factory cannot arrange for us.
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We did not ship a lot of spare part for the previously shipment, only 1% shipped with the cargo and consolidated into 1x40' container. I will arrange the transportation and customs document; if the factory cannot arrange for us.
It is not clear if the spare parts were related to the items in the shipment, or are a separate part of the shipment.


We did not ship a lot of spare parts [for/with] the previous shipment. Only 1% was shipped with the cargo, which was consolidated into a 1 x 40' container. I will arrange for the transportation and customs documentation/documents, if the factory cannot do this.
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