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| Here is the scenario... My past client contacted me state that she still interested to appoint me a job for her company. She also asks me about a couple of documents and my resume. Unfortunately, I just resigned from my previous employer and now I知 working somewhere else and might be unable to deliver the job because of time restriction. I have to concentrate my job here rather than doing freelance somewhere else. However, I知 really interested to do the job as freelancer, but I知 not sure whether I have a time to do it or not. So, here is the draft of that email. Quote:
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| It is not clear from what you say whether she is offering you full-time employment or wants to take you on as a consultant or on a free-lance basis. |
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| Dear Anglika, Thank you for your reply and your dedication to this site. I just saw you give handful assistant to lot of people out there here. For your information, I have been working with her on one project and she said I did very well in that job. When she found out that I already left from the company, she was quite surprise because she wants me to do another job for her. She just asked me thru the phone something like this Quote:
So, here is the draft. However, i'm thinking something is not right. Maybe lack of point, wording, grammar... Hmm really appreciate if you can look into it Quote:
Last edited by hampeh; 06-Feb-2008 at 15:39. |
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