Please proof read my paragraph...ASAP

[puppylove12]

Here it is, and we had to make up a Chinese animal symbol! Please tell me if you spot a complex sentence!Thank you!
Savannah

Year of the Book Worm

The year of the book worm, a worm that can be found in books, is 1995. Were you born in the year of the book worm, if so you are smart, witty, creative, and love to read. If this explains you, you could very well be a book worm (even though you were not born in 1995). You love to “devour words.” And apples are your second favorite food (make sure there are not any green worms in the apple!). Do you, also, spend much of your time in the library, and is your favorite subject Language Arts? Book shelves filled with books are home to us, and give us comfort. On rainy days you can find us curled up with a good book and a blanket, in a quiet little “nook.” Well, farewell for now, I have just got to get back to that book!

[apex2000]

With the exception of: you love to devour words, and the sentence following that they are all complex sentences. However some of them are not good English. I have already made one point to you elsewhere, and a book worm is not a worm found in books as you well know so I am a little puzzled about your intentions.

[puppylove12]

Thank you so much! You helped me a lot!
~S