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[jkl]

Kindly correct this letter for me. THANK YOU.

Dear Jim,


You returned some Block Buster Movies today, Feb.12,2008. One of the Movies you returned that does not belong to our store (BlockBuster). Title of the movie is "A". You may pick it up from our lost and found which is lacated on the first floor of the main building in the Lost and found centre.

Thank you,

Kelly.

[Anglika]

Kindly correct this letter for me. THANK YOU.

Dear Jim,


You returned some BlockBuster Movies today, Feb.12,2008. One of the movies you returned does not belong to our store (BlockBuster). The title of the movie is "A". You may pick it up from our Lost and Found Department which is located on the first floor of the main building.

Thank you,

Kelly.

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