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Old 22-Feb-2008, 07:13
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Please proofread this sentence.

1. My friend’s visit brought me a lot of warmth and good memories.
2. Lady and gentleman, I am glad to be here to give a speech. I first welcome all the guests here and thank you for coming here.

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Hi there
Please proofread this sentence.

1. My friend’s visit brought me a lot of warmth and good memories.
2. Ladies and gentlemen, I am glad [delighted/pleased/honoured] to be here to give a speech. May I first/I would first like to welcome all the guests and thank you for coming.

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I take it that you are addressing more than one woman and one man.
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