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correct my sentence
Please correct the below sentence
Last week I traveled to Riyadh city to attend a meeting related to my job.
The meeting scheduled to start from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. and I planed to take my lunch around 12:00 p.m. In the evening I meet my friend and spend a very nice time with him.
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Re: correct my sentence

Originally Posted by
dakheel
Please correct the below sentence
Last week I traveled to Riyadh city to attend a meeting related to my job.
The meeting scheduled to start from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. and I planed to take my lunch around 12:00 p.m. In the evening I meet my friend and spend a very nice time with him.
Last week I travelled to the city of Riyadh to attend a meeting related to my job. The meeting was scheduled to start at 9:00 AM, and to run until 11:00 AM. I planned to take my lunch around noon. In the evening, I met my friend and spent a very pleasant time with him.
OR, the first sentence can be:
Last week I travelled to Riyadh to attend a business meeting.
The last sentence can also be:
In the evening I met my friend, and we had a very pleasant time together.
The rest remains the same.
Hope this helps.
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