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Originally Posted by Joe Teachers, are there any problems with the following sentenses?
1. Being pro-Democrat, he only went about among some Democratic circles.
2. Where would it lead to, however, was nowhere in sight, as his self-perceived road to success. (Is "self-perceived" correctly used here?)
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1. Question: Being pro-Democrat, why only "some" circles. Why not all circles?
2. Word order: Where
it would lead to,....
I don't get the last part, 'as his self-perceived road to success'. The entire phrase sounds odd. Try, 'as
this was his self-perceived road to success'.
'self-perceived' is OK. :D