Hi everybody out there.
After looking at some forty written exams I simply can't make up my mind
whether
"Every full- moon night , he frightened the tourists"
would sound as awkward to you as it does to me ?
Or am I just ready for a nice Easter break?
I guess you'll all be swamped by tons of work
but I'd really appreciate it if somebody could help me out on this.
thanks in advance.
I'm not a professional teacher, but I would say that "night" is redundant here. Simply, "every full moon he frightened the tourists" sounds perfectly natural.
'every night of the full moon, he frightened the tourists'
I prefer:
'every night of the full moon he would appear, frightening the tourists' - said/read in a low, spooky voice!
I don't think either of these is too much of a mouthful.
Last edited by David L.; 19-Mar-2008 at 01:34.
Hi beascarpetta,
There is the original source of the discussing problem. I don’t see what you’re worrying about. Athena is situated nearer to my door than yours. Oh, excuse me, just now I found out that you were horrified not by that odd person frightening the tourists but by the miserable writer which has written that awkward sentence (a writer from Canada - a NES).
A Full Moon Night in Athens - Athens, Greece
By: W. Ruth Kozak
[You can read the full text here: http://www.bootsnall.com/articles/04...ns-greece.html The author complained about the length of the text reproduced here.]
Regards.
V.
Last edited by Tdol; 21-Jul-2008 at 16:44. Reason: To comply with the author's copyright request
Dear Vil ,
Thank you so much both for coming to my rescue and your lovely sense of humour.
I really liked that text you enclosed (but I have to confess I didn't know it existed , shame on meObviously , one needs to broaden one's horizon
and one will have to spend more time reading than chatting the time away at this site.
I do hope you are well,
thanks again,
beascarpetta