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  1. 19-Mar-2008, 09:07 #1
    Zoe2008
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    Default is this sentence correct ?

    We confirm payment received of USDxxx and will proceed shipment accordingly.
  2. 19-Mar-2008, 10:53 #2
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    Default Re: is this sentence correct ?

    A couple words can be added to help the flow of the sentence and the tenses inside.

    We have confirmed a payment of USDxxx was received and will proceed with (your) shipment accordingly.
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  3. 19-Mar-2008, 11:35 #3
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    Default Re: is this sentence correct ?

    We confirm your payment of USDxxx and accordingly we will proceed to shipment.
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