performed in a play

[bosun]

IF you see any problems, can I have your comments in the following sentences?

1. When I was young, I used to catch ants and played ants race with my friends.

2. I performed in a play called XX.

3. I want to get a high score on the sujbects I am taking.

4. When I was a high school student, I didn't like my height because I was easily noticed and it made me shy and even tired. But I am now pround of my height becuase it gives me a better look.

5.I can dedicated myself to urban planning or urban design.

6.I love myself and i want to make myself valuable as much as I love myself.

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by bosun

IF you see any problems, can I have your comments in the following sentences?

1. When I was young, I used to catch ants and played ants race with my friends. ant races OR ant racing

2. I performed in a play called XX.

3. I want to get a high score in the subjects I am taking.

4. When I was a high school student, I didn't like my height because I was easily noticed and it made me shy and even tired. But I am now proud of my height because it gives me a better look.makes me look better.

5.I can dedicated myself to urban planning or urban design.
I can dedicate myself OR I have dedicated myself.
Either planning or design can be used.

6.I love myself and I want to make myself valued as much as I love myself.

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