Reporeted speech

[aicha84]

Am I correct?
1-he said,''people must obey their countries lows''
people had to obey their countries lows,he said.
2-he said,''I must tell you about dream I had last night''
He had to tell him about dream he had have previous day,he said.
3-he said,''we must have a party to celebrate this''
they had to have a party to celebrate that,he said
4-he said,''I have just received a message''
He had just just received a message,he said.
5-he said,''you need to wait''
I needed to wait,he said.
6-he said,''when I was young I couldn't interrupted my parents''
When he had been young he couldn't had interrupted his parents,he said.
7-I said,''could you stand on your head'
He said if I could had stood on my head.
8-She said,''if I had some flour I could make a cake''
she said if I had have some flour I could had made a cake.
9-She said,''if I could drive I would take you their myself''
she said if I could had driven I would had taken you their myself.
10-I am going out tonight but I will be in by nine he said.
He said,''I am going out that night but I will be in by nine''
11-I am working in restaurant but I don't care he said.
He said ''I am working in restaurant but I don't care''
12-I can't live on my basic salary he said.
He said,''I can't live on my basic salary ''
13-We are waiting for school bus said children.
children said,"they are waiting for school bus"
14-I have made a terrible mistake said John.
John said,''I have made a terrible mistake ''
15-You have made always making terrible mistakes I said.
I said,''he have made always making terrible mistakes''
16-We have been here for tow and half years he said.
He said,''they have been there for tow and half years''
17-We will wait for you if you are late they said.
They said,''they will wait for if he is late''
18-I hope you will all get what you want I said.
I said,''I hope he will all get what he wants''

[beascarpetta]

Am I correct?

1-he said,''people must obey their countries' laws''
He said that people had to obey their countries' laws.
2-he said,''I must tell you about dream I had last night''
He said that he had to tell him/them about the dream he had had the previous night.
3-he said,''we must have a party to celebrate this''
He said that they had to have/should have a party to celebrate that.
4-he said,''I have just received a message''
He said that he had just received a message.
5-he said,''you need to wait''
He said that I needed to wait.
6-he said,''when I was young I couldn't interrupt my parents''
He said that when he had been young he hadn't been allowed to interrupt his parents.
7-I said,''could you stand on your head'
I asked/wanted to know if/whether he/she could stand on his/her head.
8-She said,''if I had some flour I could make a cake''
She said if she had some flour she could make a cake.
9-She said,''if I could drive I would take you there myself''
She said if she were able to drive/could drive she would take me/him/them there herself.
10-I am going out tonight but I will be in by nine he said.
He said that he was going out that night but that he would be in by nine.
11-I am working in restaurant but I don't care he said.
He said that he was working in a restaurant but that he didn't care.
12-I can't live on my basic salary he said.
He said that he couldn't live on his basic salary.
13-We are waiting for school bus said children.
The children said that they were waiting for the school bus.
14-I have made a terrible mistake said John.
John said that ha had made a terrible mistake
15-You have made terrible mistakes I said.
I said that he/she/they had made terrible mistakes.
16-We have been here for tow and half years he said.
He said that they had been there for two and a half years.
17-We will wait for you if you are late they said.
They said that they would wait for him if he was late.
18-I hope you will all get what you want I said.
I said that I hoped they would all get what they wanted.

hopefully,I didn't miss any spelling mistakes.