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I am reach your mobile phone and Eric. Would you please return your call to Ms. xxx, she is looking for you urgently.
I am calling both your mobile phone and Eric. Mrs xxx phoned you. She urgently needs to speak to you. Please return her call immediately.
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I am reach your mobile phone and Eric. Would you please return your call to Ms. xxx, she is looking for you urgently.
Hi Zoe

From what I can understand you are trying to reach Eric or a 3rd party on their mobile. If this is not correct please advise what you are trying to say.

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Sorry, I have been unable to contact Eric or yourself, on your mobile. Please ( or your could say...return the call to Ms xx urgently ) contact Ms xxxx urgently.

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Hi Zoe

From what I can understand you are trying to reach Eric or a 3rd party on their mobile. If this is not correct please advise what you are trying to say.

If so
Sorry, I have been unable to contact Eric or yourself, on your mobile. Please ( or your could say...return the call to Ms xx urgently ) contact Ms xxxx urgently.

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Hi Stilo,

Yes, you are correct, this is my typo.

Is should read " I cannot reach you and Eric mobile .................."

Thanks for your correction

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