is to enquire

[vil]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind to glance through the following sentence as well as to make an assessment of its suitability as a constituent part of a formal proposal
to act as agents?

Our object in writing to you is to enquire whether you would be willing to appoint us as your Agents for the sale of Compressors, Pumps and Blowers in Bulgaria.

Thank you in advance for your efforts.

Regards.

V.

[jamiep]

That looks ok as it stands.

[vil]

Hi jamiep,

Thank you for your prompt reply as well as for your backing.

Regards.

V.