Muriel the dog trainer

[Flyby]

are these sentences correct?

-> Muriel whose job is dog trainer is interesting waman, and she was in love with Macon. Muriel is careless and untidy women opposite to Macon. However when Macon was in sorrow after separating from her wife, she help him to get over it.

[Soup]

Hi Flyby

Muriel who is a dog trainer by profession is an interesting woman. She was in love with Macon. Muriel is careless and untidy which is quite the opposite from Macon's personality. However, when he was upset after separating from her wife, Muriel consoled him which helped him get over it.

[MashUK]

Originally Posted by Flyby

are these sentences correct?

-> Muriel,whose job is a dog trainer, is an interesting woman, and she was in love with Macon. Muriel is a careless and untidy woman as opposed to Macon. However,when Macon was in sorrow after separating with his wife, she helped him to get over it.