does that make sense ? please correct

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i m writing a letter to my doctor :


I have been trying hard to diagnose my weeknesses as that would help me working on repairing the damages, after all, poiting at the problem is half the cure. Unfortunately, as yet i couldn't come up with a staright answer to what has been bothering me throughout, concentration and memorizing in particular dictate my behaviour... to make a clearer picture of what i meant , i shall summarize some routine i crosse daily. supposing i m washing dishes , a very simple task , i turn to forget about what im doing , in another word i go stray.soon i find myself leaving the dishes to turn to something else , soon enough i relise that i forget to finish the dishes so i go back to doing it and so on ...sound silly doesn't ? well , it is not as simple as that , trust me .

I beleive within ourselves there is a hidden driving force that could ultimately set our success. I am going to refer to that force as "the nucleus existance ". motivations , ambitions , purpose ...encouragement ...all follows up of my existance. i think trouble starts to arise when your existance is shaken .,when the very system that holds everything together in a magneficient way is battered , the consequence can be really severe.

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I have been trying hard to diagnose my weaknesses, as that would help me work on repairing the damages. After all, pin pointing the problem is half the cure. Unfortunately, as yet, I haven't come up with a staright answer to what has been bothering me. Problems with concentration and memorizing, in particular, dictate my behaviour. To make a clearer picture of what I mean, I shall summarize some routine I cross daily: Suppose when I am washing dishes - a very simple task - I tend to forget what I am doing. In other words, I go astray. Soon I find myself leaving the dishes to turn to something else. Soon enough. I realize that I have forgotten to finish the dishes, so I go back to doing it. And so on ... sounds silly, doesn't it ? Well, it is not as simple as that, trust me .

I believe that within ourselves there is a hidden driving force that could ultimately set our success. I am going to refer to that force as "the nucleus existance." Motivations, ambitions, purpose, encouragement ... all follow up (flow out?) of my existance. I think trouble starts to arise when this existance is shaken, when the very system that holds everything together in a magnificient way is battered. The consequences can be really severe.