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Hi,

Please correct the following sentence.

The works of Muhammad Rumi, a less known poet of the 11h century, have influenced many famous authors such as Khalil Gibran, Andrew Harvey and Rabindranath Tagore.


I believe, the error lies in the bold fragment, but not able to find where it exactly lies.

Please help!

Thanks for your help in advance.

Kamlesh
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Hi Kamlesh

Lesser known is a collocation.

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Are all those guys still alive? If not then better change present perfect to past simple.
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The works of Muhammad Rumi, a little known poet of the 11h century, have influenced many famous authors such as Khalil Gibran, Andrew Harvey and Rabindranath Tagore.

Can I use little here?

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The works of Muhammad Rumi, a little known poet of the 11h century, influenced many famous authors such as Khalil Gibran, Andrew Harvey and Rabindranath Tagore.

Can I use little here?

Thanks.

I have converted that into simple past, since all of them are dead.
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The works of Muhammad Rumi, a little known poet of the 11h century, have influenced many famous authors such as Khalil Gibran, Andrew Harvey and Rabindranath Tagore.

Can I use little here?

Thanks,
Yes you can.
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