could you please correct?

[jctgf]

Hi,
Bank A is raising their fees again.
From now on, I’ll be charged $22.00 every month.
I think I’ll cancel this bank account and all credit cards, and maintain only the account in bank B.
What’s your opinion?


hi,
could you please correct this text?
thanks.

[Anglika]

Looks fine to me.

[Mzanatta]

hi! the text is fine, the only thing I´d rather change is the second will for going to since you are planning to do it in the near future and it isn´t in the "future". the rest is ok for me. bye!

[jctgf]

hi! the text is fine, the only thing I´d rather change is the second will for going to since you are planning to do it in the near future and it isn´t in the "future". the rest is ok for me. bye!

hi,
yes, I know what you mean. according to my grammar, that's how I should have written it. however, I kind of gave up using ''going to'' for planned actions and "will" for unplanned ones. There are so many exceptions that it isn't worth the concern, I humbly think.
thanks.