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    I can not beleive that the spring vocation is ended since i waited a long time and i didn't have much time to realise all my plans. During ,the vocation happened some things i enjoy them .However i wasn't expected .


    I had a nice week ,expect the hours when i had to work,because i didn't have to worry about the assignments,and that i devoted my time to other activities .Of course after all ,i needed to relax to keep my energy up for the next days

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    Quote Originally Posted by flower 5 View Post
    I can not beleive that the spring vocation is ended since i waited a long time and i didn't have much time to realise all my plans. During ,the vocation happened some things i enjoy them .However i wasn't expected .


    I had a nice week ,expect the hours when i had to work,because i didn't have to worry about the assignments,and that i devoted my time to other activities .Of course after all ,i needed to relax to keep my energy up for the next days
    Personal pronoun "I" = always capital letter.
    Vocation = a strong feeling of suitability for a particular career or occupation
    Expect = regard as likely to happen.

    One space AFTER the punctuation, like this.

    Try a revise and repost.
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    Default Re: can someone correct for me

    Say:
    I cannot believe that spring vacation is over.
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