Sir/Ma'am Pls edit my report.pls
May 5, 2008
To: Mr. Marcel Luvueno
Dept of Engineering ( Technical Insititue University)
Good Day...In behalf of Meading Coal Mining Corporation, we would like to ask for your permission to let us borrow two of your Instructors, Mr, Lagmuk ( Heavy Equipment Instructor) and Mr. Langaw ( Industrial Automation and Mechatronics Instructor. We intend for them to do an audit or evaluation on our Heavy Equipments and Industrial Automation and Hydraulic Systems... Our managment would really like to know what we do well and what we did not do well in this equipments and systems through your instructors advise and findings. Also, we would like to know waht we can improve on these equipments. Moreover, we also would like to know what are the other power of these systems so we can fully utilize its capabilities..Also, We'd like to know what are the skills of persons that should use these equipments and systems so that we will know what kind of employee we will hire. we'd like to have them look at our facilities on their preferred dates.
Sir, We really wish that you help us on this endeavor and allow your instructors to help us so that we'll be very competent in handling our Heavy Equipment and Industrial Automation Systems.
Thank you very much for your time and suppoet for this matter.
Re: Sir/Ma'am Pls edit my report.pls
Please use the above edited letter.
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