Is this sentence's structure correct?

[new2grammar]

Is the following sentence is correct gramatically, kindly rephrase if needed.

Especially, it’s for all men who want to pamper their wives with a gift that will make them happy, a very special way to say that you really care.

[susiedqq]

It’s for men who want to pamper their wives with a special gift to make them happy - a very personal way to say you really care.

[Anglika]

Is the following sentence is correct gramatically, kindly rephrase if needed.

Especially, it’s for all men who want to pamper their wives with a gift that will make them happy, a very special way to say that you really care.

It's for those men who want to pamper their wives, giving them a gift that will make them happy - a very special way of saying that you really care.

[susiedqq]

Or -

It’s for the man who wants to pamper his wife with a special gift to make her happy - a very personal way to say he really cares.