Re: please correct my memo
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Zoe2008
We have arranged a one way boat ticket for you and our consultant Wendy to our China office. The details are as follows:
Date : xxxx
Time : xxxx
Location : xxx
Our company secretary Connie will reserve the hotel and return boat ticket for you. If you
have any problem please call me on [number].
Do you need to tell them the name of the company/vessel?
Re: please correct my memo
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Anglika
Do you need to tell them the name of the company/vessel?
Hi Anglika,
No need to tell them the name of the company/vessel. Thanks for your reminder. But I would like to add one more sentence, can you review it again and correct me if possiable. The sentense is below :
After you arrived to China, our collegue will pick you up at the dock
Regards,
Zoe
Re: please correct my memo
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Zoe2008
Hi Anglika,
No need to tell them the name of the company/vessel. Thanks for your reminder. But I would like to add one more sentence, can you review it again and correct me if possible. The sentence is below :
After you arrive in China, our colleague will pick you up at the dock
Regards,
Zoe
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