please correct me

[Zoe2008]

First, we are apologize for any inconvenience caused for our late submitted the letter of credit to you.

Our customer is required Ocean bill of lading, but not bill of lading, that mean we only received the copy of document present to bank. Therefore, we are unable to fulfill your requirement to inculd this document in our letter of credit. Please understand. We accept to delete below point 3 for the cargo receipt date treat as shipment date.
Would you please explain this to your management and confirm us by return email. We will send it to our bank tomorrow and expect your will receive it on the next day. If you have any problem please contact us again.

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by Zoe2008

First, we apologize for any inconvenience caused by our late submission of the letter of credit to you.

Our customer required the Ocean bill of lading, but not bill of lading [?? what's the difference] , which meant we only received a copy of the document to present to the bank. Therefore, we are unable to fulfill your requirement to include this document in our letter of credit. Please understand. We agree to delete point 3 below for the cargo receipt date to be treated as the shipment date.

Would you please explain this to your management and confirm to us by return email. We will send it [Letter of credit or the document?] to our bank tomorrow and expect you will receive it [what is this referring to? ] on the next day. If you have any problem please contact us again.

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[Zoe2008]

Originally Posted by Anglika

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Hi Anglika,

We will send it [Letter of credit or the document?] to our bank tomorrow and expect you will receive it [what is this referring to? ] on the next day.

The meaning for 2nd it is letter of credit or the document. But this word is
appearance much times, therefore, I use it.

Regards
Zoe

[Anglika]

Hi - I think you misunderstood. It is not clear what the first "it" refers to. It could be either the letter of credit or the document that should have accompanied the letter of credit, or both of them

The second "it" will presumably be the same item as the first.

[Zoe2008]

Hi Anglika,

Yes, I got it.

That mean the sentence is : We will send Letter of credit to our bank tomorrow and expect you will receive the document on the next day. If you have any problem please contact us again.

Am I correct?

Regards
Zoe

[Anglika]

That looks fine

"We will send the letter of credit..."