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Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
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Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
Hi Zoe

Your sentence doesn't really make sence, therefore it is not easy to correct. Can you supply more information?

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Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
I appreciate your further information; now let Christine call me to hear it.

The above is suggested as a possible solution. If in doubt then some more information would be helpful.
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Hi Zoe

Like the others, I'm not exactly sure of your meaning, but it may be:

"Could you please have someone follow up for me and ask Christine to let me know as soon as you have any news".

Hope this is what you intended to say.
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Hi Neillythere,

Can you take a look for my revision: I appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise

Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you !

Have a nice weekend

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Hi Neillythere,

Can you take a look for my revision: = Can you take a look at my revised wording.

appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise = Thanks for your advice.

Have a nice weekend

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Hi Zoe

That is much better. Use advised Christine to call me. ( told is more if Christine made a mistake originally )

Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you ! = Thank you very much to ......... for helping me. I appreciate all of you!

It is a pleasure Zoe, as you are appreciative and genuinely ask/need our help to improve your English.

Take care

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