Forum newsfeeds
Forum Newsfeeds


Sites for Teachers

Sites for Teachers

Home > Forums > ESL Forums

Go Back   UsingEnglish.com ESL Forum > Learning English > Ask a Teacher
is this sentence correct? is this sentence correct?
Register FAQDonate Members List Mark Forums Read Tags

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 09-May-2008, 12:40
Zoe2008's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Jan 2008
Country: Korea
Location: Seoul
First Language: Korean
Posts: 455
Thanks: 377
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Zoe2008 is on a distinguished road
Default is this sentence correct?
Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 09-May-2008, 15:20
Member
  
Join Date: Dec 2007
Country: England
Location: South East England
First Language: English
Posts: 126
Thanks: 8
Thanked 33 Times in 32 Posts
Stilo is on a distinguished road
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
Hi Zoe

Your sentence doesn't really make sence, therefore it is not easy to correct. Can you supply more information?

Stilo
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to Stilo For This Useful Post:
Zoe2008 (11-May-2008)
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 09-May-2008, 18:45
Member
  
Join Date: Nov 2005
Country: UK
Location: UK
First Language: English
Posts: 320
Thanks: 0
Thanked 58 Times in 56 Posts
apex2000 will become famous soon enough
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
I appreciate your further information; now let Christine call me to hear it.

The above is suggested as a possible solution. If in doubt then some more information would be helpful.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to apex2000 For This Useful Post:
Zoe2008 (11-May-2008)
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 09-May-2008, 19:56
Neillythere's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Mar 2008
Country: UK
Location: Qatar/Thailand
First Language: English (UK)
Posts: 283
Thanks: 93
Thanked 113 Times in 102 Posts
Neillythere will become famous soon enoughNeillythere will become famous soon enough
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Hi Zoe

Like the others, I'm not exactly sure of your meaning, but it may be:

"Could you please have someone follow up for me and ask Christine to let me know as soon as you have any news".

Hope this is what you intended to say.
Regards
NT
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to Neillythere For This Useful Post:
Zoe2008 (11-May-2008)
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 11-May-2008, 03:36
Zoe2008's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Jan 2008
Country: Korea
Location: Seoul
First Language: Korean
Posts: 455
Thanks: 377
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Zoe2008 is on a distinguished road
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Hi Neillythere,

Can you take a look for my revision: I appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise

Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you !

Have a nice weekend

Regards
Zoe
Last edited by Zoe2008 : 11-May-2008 at 09:49.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 11-May-2008, 13:15
Member
  
Join Date: Dec 2007
Country: England
Location: South East England
First Language: English
Posts: 126
Thanks: 8
Thanked 33 Times in 32 Posts
Stilo is on a distinguished road
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
Hi Neillythere,

Can you take a look for my revision: = Can you take a look at my revised wording.

appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise = Thanks for your advice.

Have a nice weekend

Regards
Zoe
Hi Zoe

That is much better. Use advised Christine to call me. ( told is more if Christine made a mistake originally )

Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you ! = Thank you very much to ......... for helping me. I appreciate all of you!

It is a pleasure Zoe, as you are appreciative and genuinely ask/need our help to improve your English.

Take care

Regards Stilo
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to Stilo For This Useful Post:
Zoe2008 (12-May-2008)
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 12-May-2008, 16:54
Zoe2008's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Jan 2008
Country: Korea
Location: Seoul
First Language: Korean
Posts: 455
Thanks: 377
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Zoe2008 is on a distinguished road
Default Re: is this sentence correct?
Thank you again Stilo
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »


Thread Tools
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
help correct my sentence esophea Editing & Writing Topics 3 17-Jan-2008 23:26
Is this sentence correct? snade17 Ask a Teacher 3 19-Nov-2006 12:29
correct sentence shaukat mahmood Ask a Teacher 2 06-Oct-2006 16:30
Is the sentence correct? Hanka Ask a Teacher 1 03-Oct-2006 20:51
grammar jiang Ask a Teacher 8 17-Dec-2003 18:02


All times are GMT. The time now is 00:37.



vBulletin, Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.1.0
Copyright © 2002 - 2008 UsingEnglish.com