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12-May-2008, 06:30
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Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, which defines your lifestyle |
12-May-2008, 06:34
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Originally Posted by new2grammar  Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, which defines your lifestyle | What you have witten is not a complete sentence. You need a subject, verb, and punctuation.
Try: "Your new car has p ower, performance, luxury, and comfort which defines your lifestyle."
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12-May-2008, 06:39
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how about
Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, Hyundai gives you all |
12-May-2008, 06:51
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Originally Posted by new2grammar how about
Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, Hyundai gives you all | new2grammar, it appears that you are taking phrases from a Hyundai promotional advertisement. What is it that you are trying to achieve?
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12-May-2008, 06:53
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I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect, |
12-May-2008, 07:04
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Originally Posted by new2grammar I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect, | The Hyundai brochure uses short, catchy phrases to get the customer's attention. Hyundai is not interested in grammatical perfection to meet its sales quota! 
A correct sentence would be:
Hyundai gives you power, performance, luxury, and comfort .
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12-May-2008, 07:12
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I think following sentence is perfect:
Hyundai, a perfect blend of comfort and style that defines your lifestyle |
12-May-2008, 07:18
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Originally Posted by new2grammar I think following sentence is perfect:
Hyundai, a perfect blend of comfort and style that defines your lifestyle! | ` | | The Following User Says Thank You to amigos4 For This Useful Post: | |
12-May-2008, 07:57
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Originally Posted by new2grammar I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect, | 1. Make three sentences out of that.
2. What would be a better title for this thread?
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12-May-2008, 08:07
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Originally Posted by RonBee 1. Make three sentences out of that.
2. What would be a better title for this thread? | Mr. Ronbee..
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