correct sentence(s)

[Nefertiti]

1. The comments the expert made concerning stock-market bothered him greatly, making him not fall asleep all night.

2. The comments the expert made concerning stock-market bothered him greatly, which made him not fall asleep all night.

3. The comments the expert made concerned stock-market bothered him greatly, making him not fall asleep all night.

4. The comments the expert made concerned stock-market bothered him greatly, which made him not fall asleep all night.

5. Any better suggestions

Pick the appropriate sentence(s). Please explain your answer.

Thanks

[new2grammar]

I will prefer the following sentence

1. The expert’s comments on the stock marketbothered him so much that he was up the whole night.

or
2. The expert’s comments onthe stock market bothered him so much that he was not able to sleep the whole night
or
3. The expert’s comments on the stock market bothered him so much that he was unable to sleep thewhole night

[rj1948]

The expert's comments on stock market bothered and made him sleepless the whole night.

[Nefertiti]

What about 1-4? Are they OK to use?

[e2e4]

Having heard the expert's comments concerning the stock market he couldn't get asleep the whole night.

[estrellita-bonita]

Hi,
This is my first ever post! I've thought about your question and this is the best I can come up with:

He was so bothered by the expert's comments concerning the stock market that he was unable to sleep all night.

[banderas]

Originally Posted by estrellita-bonita

Hi,
This is my first ever post!

Let me be the first one to welcome you to the forums, Estrellita-Bonita!

[Nefertiti]

Hi estrellita-bonita

Welcome on board.

Why do you think 1 and 2 are inappropriate?

Maybe 1&2 are grammatical correct, but don't sound natural to you native speakers.

Thanks for the reply.

[estrellita-bonita]

Hi, thanks for the welcome ,

Yes, you are right that strictly speaking sentences 1 and 2 are not grammatically incorrect, but they sound a little awkward to a native speaker. They're probably more appropriate to spoken rather than written english.

[Barb_D]

Just as an aside, use "thet stock market" not "stock-market."

You need the article, and it has no hyphen.