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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Default please correct my grammar

    1. Please note that, 1% cartons require shipped with the goods for domestic shipment for all items, not only for HJ1258. Therefore, please replace this 1% cartons with next shipment as you did not shipped them yesterday.

    2.We are sorry to inform you that, the factory was forgot ship 1% boxes with the goods HJ1258 yesterday, and would like to replace it to you for next shipment. Would you please advise to your US office, the container no. is xxxx

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    Default Re: please correct my grammar

    please note that 1% cartons are required to be shipped with the goods for domestic shipment for all items not only for HJ1258. Therefore, please replace this 1% cartons with next shipment as you have not shipped them yesterday.


    We are sorry to inform you that the factory was forgot to ship 1% boxes with the goods HJ1258 yesterday, and would like to replace it to you with next shipment. would you please advise to your US office , the container no is xxxx.

    this may help you out ...
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    Default Re: please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    1. Please note that 1% extra cartons/boxes are to be shipped with the goods for domestic shipment for all items, not only for HJ1258. Therefore, please supply this 1% extra with the next shipment as you did not include them in yesterday's shipment.

    2.We are sorry to inform you that the factory forgot to ship the extra 1% boxes with the goods HJ1258 yesterday. They will supply them with the next shipment. Please advise your US office. The container no. is xxxx
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