Try this
Billy and Molly built a sandcastle
Little knowing it'd be such a hassle
Billy used bucket and shovel
Poor Molly got lost, then into trouble
Losing patience, she buried Billy up to his a$$hole.
I'm writing a limerick (poem) and i'm not sure if my last sentence is correct. pls help.
Billy and Molly were excited to build a sandcastle
Little did they know, that it was such a hassle
Billy use the bucket and shovel
While Molly was lost, having trouble
Losing patience Molly buried Billy under sand in a baffle
If my last sentence doesn't make sense, could you please help me change it as long as it uses baffle as the last word? And I'm using the word baffle as meaning frustrated
Try this
Billy and Molly built a sandcastle
Little knowing it'd be such a hassle
Billy used bucket and shovel
Poor Molly got lost, then into trouble
Losing patience, she buried Billy up to his a$$hole.
Billy and Molly built a sandcastle
Little knowing it'd be such a hassle
He used bucket and shovel
She got lost, then into trouble
Losing patience, she gave up in a baffle.