- 1 Post By beascarpetta
Kindly help me!!
My first take:
'Get your free Motomo necklace just for taking a minute to read this!'
My second take:
Get yourself free mottommo necklace just for reading this!
Is there any better way to write the above sentence something still short and sweet!
Re: Kindly help me!!
Depending on how formal you want the sentence to be,
I'd stick to the second sentence (but only if you want to come across as chummy)
Get yourself a free mottommo necklace just for reading this!
hope this helps.
By ssmaung in forum Editing & Writing Topics
Last Post: 19-Aug-2008, 04:20
By mitang in forum Ask a Teacher
Last Post: 23-Jul-2008, 02:58
By new2grammar in forum Letter Writing
Last Post: 16-May-2008, 06:00
By chintu in forum Ask a Teacher
Last Post: 19-Apr-2007, 15:16
By user_gary in forum Ask a Teacher
Last Post: 29-Jan-2007, 07:29
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO