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Creative writing...please correct grammar
Democracy is
Buy the people
Far the people
Off the people
Our politicians are experts in earning
Name, fame but without shame
Indeed our citizens don’t believe in casting vote but to vote castes
Our heart says ‘peace of society’ should prevail but our mind says ‘piece(s) of humans in the name of religion’ again invoked by the so called guardians of the democracy our politicians.
Kindly tell me how you find this anmd do check it for grammar, I am awry about the last para, does it sound correct?
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Re: Creative writing...please correct grammar
Amigos4.: This is a satirical takeoff, and the first 'quotes' were intended as is, I'm sure.
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Re: Creative writing...please correct grammar

Originally Posted by
David L.
Amigos4.: This is a satirical takeoff, and the first 'quotes' were intended as is, I'm sure.
You are correct Mr David, after all i try to bring out the best possible humor out of it. Please let me know if any changes you think I shall make
Thanks in advance!
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Re: Creative writing...please correct grammar

Originally Posted by
amigos4
Thanks, David! I guess this Yankee Doodle Dandy just doesn't see the satire!

Perhaps my old age is catching up with me!!!
Cheers,
Amigo
Try to run faster and don't let old age catch you
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