Creative writing...please correct grammar

[new2grammar]

Democracy is

Buy the people
Far the people
Off the people

Our politicians are experts in earning

Name, fame but without shame

Indeed our citizens don’t believe in casting vote but to vote castes

Our heart says ‘peace of society’ should prevail but our mind says ‘piece(s) of humans in the name of religion’ again invoked by the so called guardians of the democracy our politicians.

Kindly tell me how you find this anmd do check it for grammar, I am awry about the last para, does it sound correct?

[amigos4]

Originally Posted by new2grammar

Democracy is

Buy the people by the people
Far the people for the people
Off the people of the people

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new2grammar, please rework all of the following examples. None makes sense to me. Think, again, about what you are trying to say!

Our politicians are experts in earning

Name, fame but without shame

Indeed our citizens don’t believe in casting vote but to vote castes

Our heart says ‘peace of society’ should prevail but our mind says ‘piece(s) of humans in the name of religion’ again invoked by the so called guardians of the democracy our politicians.

Kindly tell me how you find this an*m*d do check it for grammar,. I am (awry) worried about the last paragraph; does it sound correct?

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[David L.]

Amigos4.: This is a satirical takeoff, and the first 'quotes' were intended as is, I'm sure.

[new2grammar]

Originally Posted by David L.

Amigos4.: This is a satirical takeoff, and the first 'quotes' were intended as is, I'm sure.

You are correct Mr David, after all i try to bring out the best possible humor out of it. Please let me know if any changes you think I shall make

Thanks in advance!

[amigos4]

Originally Posted by David L.

Amigos4.: This is a satirical takeoff, and the first 'quotes' were intended as is, I'm sure.

Thanks, David! I guess this Yankee Doodle Dandy just doesn't see the satire! Perhaps my old age is catching up with me!!!

Cheers,
Amigo

[new2grammar]

Originally Posted by amigos4

Thanks, David! I guess this Yankee Doodle Dandy just doesn't see the satire! Perhaps my old age is catching up with me!!!

Cheers,
Amigo

Try to run faster and don't let old age catch you

[amigos4]

Originally Posted by new2grammar

Try to run faster and don't let old age catch you

I'll try, new2grammar! I'll surely try!

Cheers,
Amigo