Hi new 2,Today, it is a week for the heinous twin murder that took place in the capital of crime New Delhi. Till now no arrest has been made indeed Police is still clueless about the culprit. Sometimes their suspicion points toward deceased girl’s parents and other time towards the maids who had worked at the girl’s house in the past. Police have been grilling girl’s parents and their close relatives for the past one week and according to the senior inspector, investigation is on the track and they will get hold of the culprits very soon. According to the police, the murderer seems professional killer because he slit the girl’s throat with precision, there was a deep 2.5 mm cut in the centre of the throat. Hope police will get hold of culprit soon and bring him to the justice so it can be a lesson for all corrupt minds, which are menace to the society.
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Can you please clarify if this text concerns the murder of two girls? I ask because of the reference to "twin murder".
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