Kindly correct my Paragragh

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According to the India Penal Code, if a person kills another person in the heat of argument, it is not termed as cold-blooded murder. As the murder was not pre-meditated, it might be because of instant provocation, hence a person is charged with, ‘culpable homicide amounted to murder, the punishment may range from three years to ten years imprisonment.

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According to the India Penal Code, if a person kills another in the heat of an argument, it is not considered cold-blooded murder if it was not pre-meditated. The person is charged with 'culpable homicide amounted to murder', the punishment of which may range from three to ten years imprisonment.