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I m worried if these sentences are correct and fluent. i would be happy to hear any comment o r doubt.
thank you
It was during the British rule that Indian navigational and ship building expertise and enthusiasm seems to have suffered in direct proportion to the British economic policies, reducing India to the position of a mere supplier of raw materials.
It was during the British rule that Indian navigational and ship building expertise and enthusiasm seemed to have suffered as a direct consequence of the British economic policies, reducing India to the position of a mere supplier of raw materials
It was during the British rule that Indian navigational and ship building expertise and enthusiasm seemed to have suffered (proportionately) as a direct consequence of the British economic policies, reducing India to the position of a mere supplier of raw materials
I'm worried if these sentences are correct and fluent. i would be happy to hear any comment o r doubt.
thank you
It was during the British rule that Indian navigational and ship building expertise and enthusiasm seems to have suffered in direct proportion to the British economic policies, reducing India to the position of a mere supplier of raw materials.
It looks fine to me. The only alteration I might make to omit the article before British rule and British economic policies.
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