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paraphrasing of a sentence
Dear teachers,
Would you be kind enough write in better English the following sentence from Tolstoy’s “War and Peace” ?
“Then, as happens to people with no strength of character, such a passionate desire came over him for one last taste of the familiar dissipation that he decided to go."
Thank you for your efforts.
Regards.
V.
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
I'm not a teacher.
It's hard to fully interpret the text without knowing the context of what is being stated.
However I'll try nonetheless.
Subsequently, through the weakness of his character, he felt the urge to return to his old ways.
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
Hi Colloquim,
Thank you for your exellent paraphrasing. This line from the book War and Peace captures our imagine of those who are in the grip of an addiction: "Then, as happens to people with no strength of character, such a passionate desire came over him for one last taste of the familiar dissipation that he decided to go."
For years I thought of addicts that way, as those who are weak and lack will power, those with no strength of character.
Thank you for your kindness.
Regards.
V.
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
Which of the characters does this line refer to?
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence

Originally Posted by
Clark
Which of the characters does this line refer to?
It seems to be Pierre
(War and Peace – Book One,ch.9)
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
Hi Clark,
My respected colleagin beascarpetta is in the right.
Pierre Buzekhov is the central character of this novel and its moral conscience. When he first appears, he is a loud, obnoxious man only interested in himself and the next party.
Regards.
V.
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
I've found it. It's Book One, Part 1, Ch.6
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Re: paraphrasing of a sentence
Before that Pierre had given his word to his friend Andrew that he would never take part in Kuragin's wild parties. But at that moment he felt he wanted so much to go there that he yielded the temptation and decided to go.
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